Comments on: Two Guys Living Together - Episode 2

By: George

George — Sat, 15 Aug 2009 16:51:51 +0000

Thanks for your feedback Steven. I was intending on trimming down the intro after the first couple of episodes, once I hoped people would become familiar with the show. On TV they keep to the regular intro all the time, but seeing as this is on the web, I don’t think the same applies; people just want to be thrown into the action. People’s suggestions can only make the show better. Stay tuned!

By: D.J.

D.J. — Fri, 14 Aug 2009 13:52:26 +0000

Ya I agree with your assessment, Steve. We definitely need to tighten it all up. I gotta talk to George, but I think we can shorten the intro like they always do with sitcoms. It is too long right now. Thanks for the feedback, and stay tuned as we hopefully get better.

By: Steven

Steven — Fri, 14 Aug 2009 13:47:35 +0000

You need to learn how to trim the fat. Get your joke out with one shot, maybe two if needed. The intro is way way way too long, once you present the joke, move on, don’t pause on the joke and show it in five or six different shots. This is the biggest mistake amateurs seem to make.

Cut scenes and shots like a maniac and you’ll come out with a much better final product.